Eternum is a very good game, and during its development, I learned some things from it. As for the Easter egg about 'Eternum' in the game, it's just a minor Easter egg that was added with caribdis' consent. There's no real connection between us.
Regarding your question, I once asked caribdis a question about video format conversion, and apart from that, we didn't have any intersection in game development. However, after the production of version 0.2, Mayfly was fortunate to be played by Hexatail, the author of Agent17, and we had private discussions and exchanged opinions. At this point, Hexatail is the only author who, as a fellow peer, provided guidance in the game's production. I am very grateful to him.
Furthermore, I've noticed that there has been a lot of debate surrounding this Easter egg. I don't want uninformed players to suspect that I'm leveraging the popularity of Eternum. Also, for the sake of the game's independent identity... I will be removing these Easter eggs in the reset version and replacing them with some game-related Easter eggs that I'm more familiar with (if their authors agree).
Well, the next version will be a reset version. Not only will there be visual effects reset, but also changes to some character designs and plot details. I believe it will become better... Please look forward to it.
The core of the story mainly involves adding more details and some additional content. I feel that as a visual novel game that requires a lot of emotional buildup, its progression was a bit too fast. The male protagonist and the other two female protagonists will undergo some changes in their background settings, and two new female characters will be introduced.
Oh oh really, i'm really looking forward to it, as this is the 2nd game i've seen with depth of story after eternum, i really enjoyed this game and looking forward to its developmenT
I haven't played the game yet, downloading it at this time.
BUT... Reading "Important Announcement #1" from Jason and looking at the pics, I wanna congratulate him for his quality!
NOT concerning this particular game, I take the opportunity to say something for all devs /designers....
1. Humongous boobs and asses are not realistic and I 'think' nobody is turned on by them. Which defeats the point of adult games :)
2. I played a lot of titles, yet I never felt there's been a successful, accomplished, MC. We either fck everything we see (including the neighbor's cat) or we struggle with our desires but get cockblocked on every turn (and -No! BJs and thigh-rubs don't count). I wish there was a game with multiple choices but a selective outcome. --We can flirt and fck any girl but ultimately end up with 1-3 maximum to live with. I mean, there never was a game when the 'other' girls got jealous and confronted the MC for his debauchery. It feels there's no interest and no attachment to him. Dunno how to say it better atm, sorry.
3. It's amazing when a developer revisits his title and corrects mistakes or rewrites the plot he feels has failed. We see so many launch a title and then abandon it, not caring about the community. Man..You had an idea, you worked on it, it came out luckluster- why do you abandon it and go make some other crap to launch? You basically throw the idea itself away for nothing.
Is Patreon the only thing they care about? Games are coming out fast now and eventually we will mark the opportunists and block them out
Gratz Jason for your stance behind your title, I will play it and see but as a developer.... Respect, man
As a newcomer author creating my first AVN game, it's inevitable to experience moments of setting high expectations but falling short. During the process of development, I've noticed significant improvements, and what I used to be proud of now seems far from satisfactory. This constant tormenting thought led me to make the decision to reset it.
This is an opportunity, and the only one I have. I need to prove the significance of this reset through game mechanics, rendering accuracy, and the quality of the text.
What more can I say... after all, it's still a work in progress. I hope everything goes smoothly, and I can earn more recognition from all of you.
Once again, thank you for taking the time to provide detailed feedback to remind me of the important aspects to consider in AVN games. (*Regarding your first point, I believe "Eternum" has done a fantastic job, and you might find it interesting.)
hi i don't know for sure since i haven't finished it yet, but i think Leap of Faith has that one girl path you are looking for; once again, i just play a few chapters and not the entire game but so far it seems to be like that
Its probably a compatibility issue but my phone is Samsung Galaxy A14 5G the game crashes every 10 minutes or so for Android. I dont have any other information as its crashes randomly within 10 minutes or so.
not sure how to get the crash report as it doesn't even give an error code it just closes everything and send me back to my phone screen. I more then likely just have a virus from something else I downloaded as I had this happen only 1 time before and it was fixed with a factory reset. The last time this happened it was because I downloaded a hacked game but those are like playing roulette with a virus as its a 50/50 chance even on trusted websites its still a 25% chance you get 1. I tried downloading other games and it's doing the same thing so it's a device issue or more then likely a virus on my phone.
The itch app for PC and android, its where a lot of users go to get itch.io games. Its mostly so updates are a lot easier to do since it updates the user. Using 3rd party stuff doesnt work on it like Mega and Mediafire. Idk the exact requirements but I believe Butler is the solution
Dude, You SERIOUSLY need some one competent to translate for you. It is impossible to follow the conversations. Also the background image for this page is horrible. It's difficult to read anything here.
I have secured an English proofreader to proofread all the current text of the game, as well as the text of the next update. I hope that the next update will bring you an excellent experience with the plot.
As someone already said, this is a game with a lot of potential. I like, the setting and the art style as a whole. The writing is not bad but you really need an english mothertongue that would help you with proofreading because at the current state it's difficult to follow the plot.
No worries about anyone telling you that it is a bad game. This is actually a very interesting take for a storyline. The art is good, so don't let anyone say otherwise. I appreciate you.
Not sure why, but the game is not working on my PC. Anyone else have trouble running it? My PC is no slouch, it should be able to handle it but the application is not executin
I like the visual style and Nikita is super hot. Good job on this part, as well on your work with sound effects - definitely well above average on the audio part for an AVN game.
However, you need to get someone who will help you with translations. I guess that you have used something like Google translate or DeepL. English is terrible, I could barely understand what is going on, which isn't good for a novel.
There is also a matter of winks. Every render with a wink looks weird. I am not a visual artist, I can't give you advice on how to improve this part, but every time I saw a scene with someone winking - it didn't look good.
In any case, thanks for sharing your game. I hope I didn't sound harsh.
Thank you for liking my characters and music & sound effects, I'll do better in later versions!
Yes, the English texts are currently translated using DeepL, as English is not my language. But I have found friends on the forum who are willing to make English proofreading for me, and I think maybe in 0.2 and later versions, English will no longer be the biggest problem ~
I don't quite understand what you mean by "blinking", could you please describe it a little? This will help me to improve it.
You are too kind, your wording is very polite, don't care about this problem.
It seems that the part about winks was lost in translation. To wink - is to close one of your eyes quickly. We often use it to indicate that we are joking. Like this: 😉
You use winks quite often, probably 3 or 4 times in the prologue alone. However, they always look unnatural, probably because you only close the character's eye and when a person winks - you normally should also see changes in facial expression, forehead/eyebrow movement.
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有點遺憾以後沒有中文翻譯
依舊會有的，暫時無需擔心這個問題。
any expected time on when the next update is?
Perhaps it will be in October.
The most significant part of the game is already about 90% complete.
Does the gallery work? I can't open mine so I'm asking if everyone's gallery work and only mine doesn't
Open in the next version.
Gofile for pc link is dead, just so you know
Maybe it's been quite a while since anyone downloaded it.
No matter, it's just about time for a new update.
THE CAT COSTUME STAYS ON DURING SEX!!
Edit 1: so you are saying that *insert austrian painter* was a man of culture???
Will remove these jokey bits that will be controversial in the reset version.
This work is great. Have you invited authors from the Etermum to participate in the production or guidance?
Eternum is a very good game, and during its development, I learned some things from it. As for the Easter egg about 'Eternum' in the game, it's just a minor Easter egg that was added with caribdis' consent. There's no real connection between us.
Regarding your question, I once asked caribdis a question about video format conversion, and apart from that, we didn't have any intersection in game development. However, after the production of version 0.2, Mayfly was fortunate to be played by Hexatail, the author of Agent17, and we had private discussions and exchanged opinions. At this point, Hexatail is the only author who, as a fellow peer, provided guidance in the game's production. I am very grateful to him.
Furthermore, I've noticed that there has been a lot of debate surrounding this Easter egg. I don't want uninformed players to suspect that I'm leveraging the popularity of Eternum. Also, for the sake of the game's independent identity... I will be removing these Easter eggs in the reset version and replacing them with some game-related Easter eggs that I'm more familiar with (if their authors agree).
Thank you for your love and support for the game.
thats unfortunate, I found the eternum reference to be a funny little suprise.
any animations?
yeah, there's about 20 animations.
Good job for making this wonderful game and having a nice story, but you're making the MC a little bit cocky so that's a minus for me.
KEEP up the good work looking forward for next chapter.
Well, the next version will be a reset version.
Not only will there be visual effects reset, but also changes to some character designs and plot details.
I believe it will become better... Please look forward to it.
oh, will there be a change in the character's appearance? I feel so good now
Basically, no.
What do you mean will the images get replaced with better one or will the story change
Both.
The core of the story mainly involves adding more details and some additional content.
I feel that as a visual novel game that requires a lot of emotional buildup, its progression was a bit too fast.
The male protagonist and the other two female protagonists will undergo some changes in their background settings, and two new female characters will be introduced.
Cocky mc is fine bro dont listen to them as long as the MC is not Adam22 you doing good
when will there be a new version?
Maybe...
September?
Oh oh really, i'm really looking forward to it, as this is the 2nd game i've seen with depth of story after eternum, i really enjoyed this game and looking forward to its developmenT
Aww damn I can't wait to play the sequel
你有中国的支持网站么？我想支持你但是我没法在这支付钱
nope, sry,
I haven't played the game yet, downloading it at this time.
BUT... Reading "Important Announcement #1" from Jason and looking at the pics, I wanna congratulate him for his quality!
NOT concerning this particular game, I take the opportunity to say something for all devs /designers....
1. Humongous boobs and asses are not realistic and I 'think' nobody is turned on by them. Which defeats the point of adult games :)
2. I played a lot of titles, yet I never felt there's been a successful, accomplished, MC. We either fck everything we see (including the neighbor's cat) or we struggle with our desires but get cockblocked on every turn (and -No! BJs and thigh-rubs don't count). I wish there was a game with multiple choices but a selective outcome. --We can flirt and fck any girl but ultimately end up with 1-3 maximum to live with. I mean, there never was a game when the 'other' girls got jealous and confronted the MC for his debauchery. It feels there's no interest and no attachment to him. Dunno how to say it better atm, sorry.
3. It's amazing when a developer revisits his title and corrects mistakes or rewrites the plot he feels has failed. We see so many launch a title and then abandon it, not caring about the community. Man..You had an idea, you worked on it, it came out luckluster- why do you abandon it and go make some other crap to launch? You basically throw the idea itself away for nothing.
Is Patreon the only thing they care about? Games are coming out fast now and eventually we will mark the opportunists and block them out
Gratz Jason for your stance behind your title, I will play it and see but as a developer.... Respect, man
Hey, Navar, thank you for your response.
As a newcomer author creating my first AVN game, it's inevitable to experience moments of setting high expectations but falling short. During the process of development, I've noticed significant improvements, and what I used to be proud of now seems far from satisfactory. This constant tormenting thought led me to make the decision to reset it.
This is an opportunity, and the only one I have. I need to prove the significance of this reset through game mechanics, rendering accuracy, and the quality of the text.
What more can I say... after all, it's still a work in progress. I hope everything goes smoothly, and I can earn more recognition from all of you.
Once again, thank you for taking the time to provide detailed feedback to remind me of the important aspects to consider in AVN games. (*Regarding your first point, I believe "Eternum" has done a fantastic job, and you might find it interesting.)
I did like Eternum, yes. I liked other games too from Caribdis and Jestur and I'm waiting on updates for several titles :)
Keep up the good work, I'll follow
hi i don't know for sure since i haven't finished it yet, but i think Leap of Faith has that one girl path you are looking for; once again, i just play a few chapters and not the entire game but so far it seems to be like that
九月会更新0.3版本吗？
我預計八月會更重製版+0.3
Great, will version 0.3 have Chinese?
maybe
Show post...
any gay stuff?
no
Wtf ur disgusting. We don't do that here.
有中文我是真没想到的, 这中文翻译真的是紧跟网络时代潮流呀!!!
重置版劇本應該不再會有這部分內容了*
为什么
第一次见时，我也这个反应
is this one girl kinda deal or an harem?
harem
does this game have H-scenes or whatever its called by any chance?
Of course.
is this game have ntr and sharing?
No&never.
good
Its probably a compatibility issue but my phone is Samsung Galaxy A14 5G the game crashes every 10 minutes or so for Android. I dont have any other information as its crashes randomly within 10 minutes or so.
Hmm... I may not be able to fix this aspect without a crash report.
not sure how to get the crash report as it doesn't even give an error code it just closes everything and send me back to my phone screen. I more then likely just have a virus from something else I downloaded as I had this happen only 1 time before and it was fixed with a factory reset. The last time this happened it was because I downloaded a hacked game but those are like playing roulette with a virus as its a 50/50 chance even on trusted websites its still a 25% chance you get 1. I tried downloading other games and it's doing the same thing so it's a device issue or more then likely a virus on my phone.
ok silly question is this the 3rd Update or a Modified Second update? I ask because i have 2 all ready?
Because someone below thought it was bad/inconvenient not to upload game files in itch.
So I requested extra upload capacity from itch and the game didn't change anything.
AHH that explains it. sorry to Bother you!
Cant wait for this to be updated to work on the itch app so I can play it (if youre going to that is)
Uh ...... What does "updated to work on the itch app" mean?
The itch app for PC and android, its where a lot of users go to get itch.io games. Its mostly so updates are a lot easier to do since it updates the user. Using 3rd party stuff doesnt work on it like Mega and Mediafire. Idk the exact requirements but I believe Butler is the solution
Hmm... If you mean uploading the game files directly to itch...
Itch has a requirement that the file size cannot be larger than 1G...
Ive heard you can request a higher file size from them, not sure if its an email thing or something else, havent tried publishing any games here yet
Okay, I'll try it.
Thx.
pregnancy?
Will be added in the future (optional).
It looks to be a really nice quality. I Think I might enjoy this one, eventhough its still short right now!
The public version of 0.2 will be released on the 22nd~
Thanks for the notification :P
Truth be told, it only has an initial version right now.
About 2000 lines of dialogue and 800 renders.
If you think it's too short, I expect you to play it after I update a few more versions.
It is expected that the next update should be at the end of March or mid-April.
Good renders.👌🏻
Thanks~
The art is fantastic. Definitely S-class art 10/10
Thanks for your love~
游戏的画面精美潜力很大，但是我发现了一个问题有些动画重复播放后面会出现黑屏一下的情况我希望能在正式版本修复，祝福你们能取得成功，相信你们能做得更好。
黑屏的原因我猜可能是因為我做了一個漸進漸出的動畫效果。
最開始是覺得如果不做這個效果會導致視頻重複播放時太過生硬。如果不是因為這個的話，我想具體向您瞭解一下具體是什麽問題。
感謝您向我提出意見！
Dude, You SERIOUSLY need some one competent to translate for you. It is impossible to follow the conversations.
Also the background image for this page is horrible. It's difficult to read anything here.
Received.
I have found English proofreading for me, and this page I will replace in a while.
Thank you for your suggestion!
New background image is MUCH better for reading. Well done!
The animations of this game are really good, but the translation is pretty bad. Do you have any plans for better English translation?
Hey, I'm sorry for the bad gaming experience.
I have secured an English proofreader to proofread all the current text of the game, as well as the text of the next update. I hope that the next update will bring you an excellent experience with the plot.
You're the man
玩惯了国产那些质量不高的叙事性不强的游戏，第一次发现这样有官方中文而且文字功底十分强的游戏，近乎于封神了。虽然只能体验到第一章节如此简短的内容，但是就此番体验而言，这绝对是一部未来可期的神作！里面的梗也是让我应接不暇，有着能让我秒懂的本土梗。不过希望在游戏后续的开发当中，能看到好感度系统的制作（当然是在作者尚有余暇的时候），在提升好感度的时候，希望能够看到提示来表明我选择了正确的选项。今后依旧会继续支持作者大大的作品的！
提前祝你新年快乐！
谢谢你的支持，我会尽量加快对renpy和动态动画的学习，尽量在正式第一章加入好感度系统的～
Very nice.
Thank you for your love and support!
很高兴能看到国人的优秀作品，本地化这方面没的说，梗是一句接一句，可以看到思路在向Caribdis靠，有很多标志性的运镜演出，但其中有些意义不太明确。Caribdis的游戏是我认为的同类天花板，沉浸式体验感很好，希望你们有一天能够达到甚至超越他们的水平，非常期待后续更新！
谢谢！
Author, where are you from?. Is it convenient to tell me?
Uh, there was a Canadian and a Chinese on the team.
太棒了！你知道的，我就是前几天那名中国玩家，为了和您交流，我试着用英文，但是我没想到您团队里居然有中国人，我很激动！我会把这款游戏推荐给更多中国朋友，希望这款游戏越做越好！
谢谢你的祝福，提前祝你新年快乐～
Also, in the next version, there will be an American student who will provide us with an English translation.
As someone already said, this is a game with a lot of potential. I like, the setting and the art style as a whole. The writing is not bad but you really need an english mothertongue that would help you with proofreading because at the current state it's difficult to follow the plot.
That said, keep up the good work!
Thank you for your support, I will do better!
No worries about anyone telling you that it is a bad game. This is actually a very interesting take for a storyline. The art is good, so don't let anyone say otherwise. I appreciate you.
Thank you for your support!
Excuse me, when will version 0.2 be released?I can't wait.
Uh...
March or April, I think.
Not sure why, but the game is not working on my PC. Anyone else have trouble running it? My PC is no slouch, it should be able to handle it but the application is not executin
This is the first time I've heard that it doesn't work properly on a PC,Is your computer an Apple system(Mac)?
If not, is it convenient to provide your PC configuration?
1. What's the game's length/average session ?
2. The background pic and the font color of this page are not very compatible.
In total, the first update includes the following:
Pictures: 750
Code: 4750 lines
ui: 100%
Music/sfx: 100%
Animation: 29 segments
Thank you for your suggestion, I will improve the coordination of the page afterwards.
This game is god tire
我是一名中国玩家，我非常喜欢这款游戏，视觉效果和画面质量以及人物建模已经远远超过我玩过的其他同类游戏。但是美中不足的是人物的面部表情略显僵硬，希望作者可以优化一下，因为此类游戏给人的真实感非常重要，其次就是完美的剧情，我非常期待后续的更新。“在冰冷沧海中的一日蜉蝣，亦有传奇的一刻”
您好！
感謝您喜歡這款遊戲！
面部表情更多是因為只能使用hs2預設的十個表情，如果想讓他們的表情變大的話，就會顯得有些悶硬。
我会尽量在未来版本中解決这些问题。
Will there be a Mac version?
I will release a Mac version in 0.2 and later if you need it
I like the visual style and Nikita is super hot. Good job on this part, as well on your work with sound effects - definitely well above average on the audio part for an AVN game.
However, you need to get someone who will help you with translations. I guess that you have used something like Google translate or DeepL. English is terrible, I could barely understand what is going on, which isn't good for a novel.
There is also a matter of winks. Every render with a wink looks weird. I am not a visual artist, I can't give you advice on how to improve this part, but every time I saw a scene with someone winking - it didn't look good.
In any case, thanks for sharing your game. I hope I didn't sound harsh.
Thank you for liking my characters and music & sound effects, I'll do better in later versions!
Yes, the English texts are currently translated using DeepL, as English is not my language. But I have found friends on the forum who are willing to make English proofreading for me, and I think maybe in 0.2 and later versions, English will no longer be the biggest problem ~
I don't quite understand what you mean by "blinking", could you please describe it a little? This will help me to improve it.
You are too kind, your wording is very polite, don't care about this problem.
It seems that the part about winks was lost in translation. To wink - is to close one of your eyes quickly. We often use it to indicate that we are joking. Like this: 😉
You use winks quite often, probably 3 or 4 times in the prologue alone. However, they always look unnatural, probably because you only close the character's eye and when a person winks - you normally should also see changes in facial expression, forehead/eyebrow movement.
Ok, I understand now.
Still my personal skills are not up to snuff and I'm very sorry for the bad gaming experience! I will try to improve it in future updates.
🤓👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻🤓