This game is the most wonderful I have ever played. Both modeling and plot are masterpieces. Thank Jason for creating such excellent works. I am very much looking forward to the next update (by the way, will ntr appear in future version updates? I don't want to see such a good female character insulted) ( ✘_✘ )↯

Я один не могу понять где включить Русский язык ???

首先谢谢Jason带来这部精心制作的作品，它的人物建模十分精致。但更让我欣赏的是0.2开始的精彩对话内容，其中有一些中文色彩的典故或话梗十分巧妙。另外，我有些好奇您是否有意在表达一些左派的现实主义观点，因为我在0.2后半部分看到大量富有这样深意的对话内容，我感到非常不错。

总之，这部作品十分优秀，我们期待您的更新。我知道慢工出细活，但并非所有人都赞成这个观点，所以更迅速的更新或许可以让这部好作品更加火爆！加油，Jason！

首先還是要感謝作者，但1年多H只有兩個其中一個還被中斷真的很煎熬，可以的話我是真的希望能加速當然前提是您有時間的話啦，聽你說EP3打算花4~6個月製作，加油加油

TLDR: Needs a prologue or something to properly explain everything and the characters. Might be my sleep deprivation stopping me from understanding it, gonna try and get some actual sleep for once and play it from the beginning later and see if my opinion's changed. Everything else is pretty good tho (graphics, character designs, environment, etc)

I'm gonna be honest here, this game has everything it needs to be good but I just feel confused trying to understand the characters so far. Graphics are good, character designs are good, and the overall setup seems good too. But the characters are kinda just there and it feels like you're supposed to know them already.

I think it'd benefit greatly from a sort of prologue chapter that  properly introduces the characters. Because currently it feels like grabbing a book to read, flipping to the first page, and it says chapter 4 despite being the very first book in the series, and it expects you to already know each character. Like the very first interaction you have with Emma is sex and the only explanation you get is "this isn't the first time we've done this" which is fairly self-explanatory but at the same time makes her feel like the "obligatory sex scene because otherwise it wouldn't be an adult vn" character. Then with Nikita she went to the same academy as the MC but she acts like she's been a vigilante for over 20 years or something while the MC is just a new recruit and the start of the game is his very first "real" mission. She was the MC's senior in the academy but... that isn't really explained much at all. Then they act like best friends and go out drinking (Which they've done multiple times apparently) but strangers at the same time. Same goes with Ling, like the MC went to the academy with her too or something but you know nothing about her and she's just there once or twice.

I know there's already a small exposition before the actual game begins, but that just tells you that MC's parents are dead, he lives with his friend's family (Emma and her mom), and went to a police academy. All in like 5 or 8 sentences. I feel like if it was it's own actual chapter and you got to see some of his experiences in the academy as well as interactions with Emma, Ling, and Nikita that'd make it more comprehensible and give them more of a reason to be there. An actual background that the player could use as a point of reference.

That mission at the start feels like the beginning of a spy movie where usually it goes "that's me and my team, I bet you're wondering how we got here" then the entire movie is the setup leading up to that point. But the game doesn't do that. There's no flashback where the MC interrupts and then goes "Oh yeah, I should probably explain what's going on and how I got into this situation so you aren't confused." Instead you get a bunch of bandits and guards talking about a bunch of things in the game's world, which leads to an overload of information and almost none of it is immediately relevant.

I don't know if it's just my sleep deprivation or what, but it just doesn't feel right to me. I'm gonna give it a few days to get some actual sleep, reinstall the game, replay it from the start, then come back and see if my opinion on it has changed at all. Graphics are great, character designs are great, environment looks pretty good too, animations were great, and the story seems like it has potential.

Visually stunning with a very interesting story, though the dialogue is sometimes a bit off. Is it translated from another language? That's how it feels anyway. It might be a good idea to have a native English speaker proofread the script.

Another thing that I noticed is that it's kind of unclear what your relationship to all of the people are. How long they've known each other, how close they are before the game starts, etc. Nikita for example seems to switch between having known MC for months and as if he just started working with her a week ago in the way she talks to him.

I'm very much looking forward to the next update, though. 

Fuckin Amazing. one of the best adult games i have ever played. background score i THE BEST. It really builds the atmosphere. the story is also good. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! EAGERLY WAITING FOR UPDATES

One in a million game here. Shit gets real and reflects dystopian Real Life.

4th Wall breaking and other jokes bring levity, but there is a very hardened storyline (like most AVNs), showing how, like most titles, it is a kinetic story w/makeup.

I never hold back on comments, good or bad, so I’ll say it bluntly. It reminds me of the Apocalyptic Times we are in, and it strangles my Tie. This may, I hope, need the mythic “ #nsfl “ tag.

Jason, the production thinly veils what many of us once wrote off as “fantasy”, fantasies that one can find in newspaper articles & medical papers IRL. Perfect delivery of terrifying truth!

Thank you for painting the #Snowpiercer of this decade. Just… make it truly Dynamic, w/meamingful choices. I get the restraints -the dragon- has on production as The Eagle signs its half of The Marble’s Swan Song, but this point is moot considering the glacial pace of production that may not render completion before Apollyon’s march.

In short:

1. Veery Realistic (so far). Keep it that way, make even more reliable than Bitchute or X! A man wrote the world’s most terrifying Book from #Patymos some millemia ago, maybe you can find inspiration there, at least from 1 angle.

2. The pace is prohibitively slow. Hurry it up.

3. Grammar used is actually high quality here, very succinct! Top Shelf!

4. The story is still very short, so you have time to craft in life-altering & truly direction-altering) choices. Do so!

5. In 1 year, only 1 update. You mentioned “resetting” the quality. Now it’s “upgraded”, hurry! Good images & great English. You leveled up. Done. Good job. Now, hurry! You can do it! You MUST do it!

i can't even imagine how many hours you spent in this game, every scene is a work of art. The story is very deep too.

10/10

10/10 one of the best keep it up brother👍

10/10 The best AVN i've played so far. The animation and VFX is just outstanding. great job Jason!

为什么我用平板下安卓的下载不成功？

Is it available for Android 14?if not, when?

Oh god damn Jason.. You crafted a masterpiece here. By far the best graphics I've ever seen on an upcoming AVN. The animation is on par with the top games. I'm looking forward to more sex scenes too! Damn I was disappointed with Nikita's scene haha. But it was amazing. The Eternum cameo(is that what it's called) is well-placed and to be honest I didn't expect Laufey. Fits the vibe of the scene really well. And wow Jason. Wow. The end credit is so.. interesting for some damn reason. (not to mention the feet scene😛😛😛)  The song the characters wow. Wow! I'll be waiting for EP3 my guy.

Keep up the good work!

Your game is freaking greatt!! But the only problem i have is the sex scene you need to improve it , there's nothing much to see when the character are having sex..

needs ntr

Hi. I tried your AVN and I'm afraid I was not impressed.

On the positive side the character models were very beautiful and the quality of the graphics was quite high.

But I found the story hard to follow, I got bored early on and just stopped trying to track what was happening. I think I grew bored because I have seen other similar stories before, so I found the story to be uninspired.

I didn't think the MC was anything special or that he deserved all of the attention he was getting, I didn't know or care what his superpower was...

The only female character I was interested in at all was Ling and even then I'd be hard pressed to say what I liked about her apart from her general appearance. Personally I dont think that's a very good reason to like a girl, so I was quite disappointed in the female characters.

I think the choices are almost meaningless. They only seem to offer relationship points, which only lead to lewds. I dont think they will change the actual story in any way. I think I could take the most negative option possible in every choice, destroy every romance in the story and the end result would be exactly the same...

Next is a topic I find difficult. You see I really hate Eternum, so seeing a reference to it in your AVN was a massive turn off for me. 

So for all of these reason I have to give your AVN 1 star and I cannot in good faith back you in any way.

I will trouble you no further.

Hey there, previous player here. I downloaded your game and played it back a few months ago and really loved it. I'm glad to see it updated with a new chapter but I wanted to point out something I don't think has been noticed. I saw with your latest release that it was also on the itch.io launcher, and I went to install it only for it to give me the incompatible third-party website error even though I can clearly see the reset version can be installed through the launcher. Is there a way to fix this?

求攻略求攻略

谁有攻略啊 我都怕玩

After playing Eternum, other games didn't seem to shock me very much until I played this one. It was very fun, with music, modeling, and graphics that amazed me while playing. It ranked second in my mind. You are an excellent author, and I really hope to play the second chapter soon. Thank you for making this game. I am your loyal fan!

How did made this stuff?🤔 I'm wandering I'm planning to made mine too but I don't have or know what application should I use any suggestion I'm bigginer btw..

Is this 0.2?

未来可期，希望早日更新。