As someone already said, this is a game with a lot of potential. I like, the setting and the art style as a whole. The writing is not bad but you really need an english mothertongue that would help you with proofreading because at the current state it's difficult to follow the plot.
No worries about anyone telling you that it is a bad game. This is actually a very interesting take for a storyline. The art is good, so don't let anyone say otherwise. I appreciate you.
Not sure why, but the game is not working on my PC. Anyone else have trouble running it? My PC is no slouch, it should be able to handle it but the application is not executin
I like the visual style and Nikita is super hot. Good job on this part, as well on your work with sound effects - definitely well above average on the audio part for an AVN game.
However, you need to get someone who will help you with translations. I guess that you have used something like Google translate or DeepL. English is terrible, I could barely understand what is going on, which isn't good for a novel.
There is also a matter of winks. Every render with a wink looks weird. I am not a visual artist, I can't give you advice on how to improve this part, but every time I saw a scene with someone winking - it didn't look good.
In any case, thanks for sharing your game. I hope I didn't sound harsh.
Thank you for liking my characters and music & sound effects, I'll do better in later versions!
Yes, the English texts are currently translated using DeepL, as English is not my language. But I have found friends on the forum who are willing to make English proofreading for me, and I think maybe in 0.2 and later versions, English will no longer be the biggest problem ~
I don't quite understand what you mean by "blinking", could you please describe it a little? This will help me to improve it.
You are too kind, your wording is very polite, don't care about this problem.
It seems that the part about winks was lost in translation. To wink - is to close one of your eyes quickly. We often use it to indicate that we are joking. Like this: 😉
You use winks quite often, probably 3 or 4 times in the prologue alone. However, they always look unnatural, probably because you only close the character's eye and when a person winks - you normally should also see changes in facial expression, forehead/eyebrow movement.
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玩惯了国产那些质量不高的叙事性不强的游戏，第一次发现这样有官方中文而且文字功底十分强的游戏，近乎于封神了。虽然只能体验到第一章节如此简短的内容，但是就此番体验而言，这绝对是一部未来可期的神作！里面的梗也是让我应接不暇，有着能让我秒懂的本土梗。不过希望在游戏后续的开发当中，能看到好感度系统的制作（当然是在作者尚有余暇的时候），在提升好感度的时候，希望能够看到提示来表明我选择了正确的选项。今后依旧会继续支持作者大大的作品的！
提前祝你新年快乐！
谢谢你的支持，我会尽量加快对renpy和动态动画的学习，尽量在正式第一章加入好感度系统的～
Very nice.
Thank you for your love and support!
很高兴能看到国人的优秀作品，本地化这方面没的说，梗是一句接一句，可以看到思路在向Caribdis靠，有很多标志性的运镜演出，但其中有些意义不太明确。Caribdis的游戏是我认为的同类天花板，沉浸式体验感很好，希望你们有一天能够达到甚至超越他们的水平，非常期待后续更新！
谢谢！
Author, where are you from?. Is it convenient to tell me?
Uh, there was a Canadian and a Chinese on the team.
太棒了！你知道的，我就是前几天那名中国玩家，为了和您交流，我试着用英文，但是我没想到您团队里居然有中国人，我很激动！我会把这款游戏推荐给更多中国朋友，希望这款游戏越做越好！
谢谢你的祝福，提前祝你新年快乐～
Also, in the next version, there will be an American student who will provide us with an English translation.
As someone already said, this is a game with a lot of potential. I like, the setting and the art style as a whole. The writing is not bad but you really need an english mothertongue that would help you with proofreading because at the current state it's difficult to follow the plot.
That said, keep up the good work!
Thank you for your support, I will do better!
No worries about anyone telling you that it is a bad game. This is actually a very interesting take for a storyline. The art is good, so don't let anyone say otherwise. I appreciate you.
Thank you for your support!
Excuse me, when will version 0.2 be released?I can't wait.
Uh...
March or April, I think.
Not sure why, but the game is not working on my PC. Anyone else have trouble running it? My PC is no slouch, it should be able to handle it but the application is not executin
This is the first time I've heard that it doesn't work properly on a PC,Is your computer an Apple system(Mac)?
If not, is it convenient to provide your PC configuration?
1. What's the game's length/average session ?
2. The background pic and the font color of this page are not very compatible.
In total, the first update includes the following:
Pictures: 750
Code: 4750 lines
ui: 100%
Music/sfx: 100%
Animation: 29 segments
Thank you for your suggestion, I will improve the coordination of the page afterwards.
This game is god tire
我是一名中国玩家，我非常喜欢这款游戏，视觉效果和画面质量以及人物建模已经远远超过我玩过的其他同类游戏。但是美中不足的是人物的面部表情略显僵硬，希望作者可以优化一下，因为此类游戏给人的真实感非常重要，其次就是完美的剧情，我非常期待后续的更新。“在冰冷沧海中的一日蜉蝣，亦有传奇的一刻”
您好！
感謝您喜歡這款遊戲！
面部表情更多是因為只能使用hs2預設的十個表情，如果想讓他們的表情變大的話，就會顯得有些悶硬。
我会尽量在未来版本中解決这些问题。
Will there be a Mac version?
I will release a Mac version in 0.2 and later if you need it
I like the visual style and Nikita is super hot. Good job on this part, as well on your work with sound effects - definitely well above average on the audio part for an AVN game.
However, you need to get someone who will help you with translations. I guess that you have used something like Google translate or DeepL. English is terrible, I could barely understand what is going on, which isn't good for a novel.
There is also a matter of winks. Every render with a wink looks weird. I am not a visual artist, I can't give you advice on how to improve this part, but every time I saw a scene with someone winking - it didn't look good.
In any case, thanks for sharing your game. I hope I didn't sound harsh.
Thank you for liking my characters and music & sound effects, I'll do better in later versions!
Yes, the English texts are currently translated using DeepL, as English is not my language. But I have found friends on the forum who are willing to make English proofreading for me, and I think maybe in 0.2 and later versions, English will no longer be the biggest problem ~
I don't quite understand what you mean by "blinking", could you please describe it a little? This will help me to improve it.
You are too kind, your wording is very polite, don't care about this problem.
It seems that the part about winks was lost in translation. To wink - is to close one of your eyes quickly. We often use it to indicate that we are joking. Like this: 😉
You use winks quite often, probably 3 or 4 times in the prologue alone. However, they always look unnatural, probably because you only close the character's eye and when a person winks - you normally should also see changes in facial expression, forehead/eyebrow movement.
Ok, I understand now.
Still my personal skills are not up to snuff and I'm very sorry for the bad gaming experience! I will try to improve it in future updates.
🤓👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻🤓