MayFly

This is a 10/10 game. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update. I just would like to ask, is this a one girl kinda story or is the also harem route(I hope there is) either way this is a good game

Okay, thanks for the answer, but as for the second episode? Is the game still in development?

I really liked the game, I really liked the plot, the Persians, the realization of the world around me, I'm really looking forward to the release of the full version. Could you tell me when it will be released approximately?

作者大大，我是从其他渠道下载到这个游戏的，玩了一章后觉得很不错，找了半天连夜注册账号搞了半天想解答心中的疑惑，也了解到目前只有一个章节，是不是我的这个版本（即使是盗版）只要我不卸载，后来的某一天您更新了新的内容，我再等到那一天再打开就可以更新游玩了呢？

This is very impressive. I like how you have borrowed good elements from Eternum with acknowledgement, but also  injected your own flavor and interpretation into story telling.

The characters and background rendering is pleasing and more slanted towards surrealism than Eternum and combined together with good use of lighting, shadow and angles, create a unique ambience that I have not seen elsewhere in other VNs.

I've only started playing a couple of hours and so far the story shows potential. Only thing I would feedback is the background music volume is sometimes inconsistent. I found myself adjusting headphone volume time to time for a normalized experience.

Looking at the comments below, it seems like yourself and/or many of your audience is Chinese which  explains why the feel of this game is very East Asian. 

Please keep up the good work and hope to this game develops further and becomes another classic.

Will u update this game in future? 

Tbh it's the best artsyle in itch io

请问一下，作者是那个国家的人，玩了一会游戏，里面的某些中文让我感觉很熟悉

Is there only one chapter?

I downloaded Android from mega ,the game ends after the scene with black haired girl,is this the full version ryt now or m i tripping

什么时候更新

Gonna start off by letting you know, this is a great game. 

There was a weird bug that I noticed though. All sound is tied to the music. Meaning if I lower the sound of the music the voice and background sounds also reduce in volume. 

also the H-scene loops aren't smooth, not sure if this is a bug because of my potato laptop or if that's just how it was made. 

But other than that great game and can't wait for more to come.

Hi JasonTon, I truly amazed of all the detailed renders and characters, I love all the characters that you introduced in MayFly, all the characters got its own personality and way of approach with the MC, hoping to get more Jimin and Nikita scene they are too beautiful tbh, keep up the great work and I looking forward for the part two of MayFly!!!!!!

你好，玩到你的游戏真的很不错，建模真的很棒，这个游戏是有前作吗？希望你可以快点更新，就这一个场景已经满足不了我了

为什么玩了后感觉0.2的剧情不像是0.1的延续，在某一程度上有点像是0.1的前传但感觉也不完全是。所以说这两个版本的剧情是独立的吗？难道说是在0.1后作者想到或听取了一些建议将剧情重新改写了吗？如果是这样的话，我觉得0.1也有很多可取的部分，遗弃了的话有点可惜。因为这是我第一次玩到这种还在开发中甚至还在（很）早期的游戏，不是很清楚这种version0.几的意思。但我认为这个游戏非常好，作为一个galgame玩家，虽然这个游戏某些部分可能有点“简陋”和“草率”，但我玩下来没有感觉到任何的雷点，而且行文幽默，有很多梗等，角色很好看，hs也很好用，可惜没有配音，不知道以后有机会能加上（哪怕是ai的配音，但是不知道这种方式能不能够用于开发游戏。而且我玩gal习惯了日语配音，如果听国语的话可能有违和感）。期待续作，作者加油。

安卓版本，没音乐吗？

之前有一版让子弹飞，春梦播比奇堡配乐，那个版本我听音乐是正常的。

现在这个版本我玩到门徒买车这点，耳机和外放都感觉没有配乐一样。

很棒的游戏 期待您的更新

‍您好这个游戏我非常喜欢，我希望可以继续玩到，期待您的更新。

这个作品属于令人享受的那一种，游玩过程很快乐。

出于好奇，这个游戏的文本，最开始是什么语言？

这个游戏开头是不是在致敬蝙蝠侠黑暗骑士😀

亲爱的作者，这个游戏目前只有这么多内容吗？只有一个动作屏幕，它就结束了

Was liking it well enough until the scene with the girl in your home, what kind of person does that with someone they grew up with without a second thought? Should have been a choice.

you gonna add a walkthrough mod in future? Some people are quite stupid when it comes to games, Me included 

Hi there, enjoyed the release so far once I got into it, but it took a bit to get there. I can see you've already remade the opening once, but imo the pacing still isn't quite there; the scene with the bank robbers before the heist just drags a little too much imo, and given they don't even have names it's fairly obvious they're not important characters. Once we got past that it was really good, but it being right at the start might turn some people away. 

I'd suggest going through that part and working out what parts you don't need just to streamline it a little more, and also maybe consider coming up with codenames for each of them so they seem a little less expendable. Perception is important and if you give away that they're irrelevant mooks, it makes it even harder to justify spending so long with them narratively. 

Hope this help, outside of the slow open I really enjoyed what you've done so far and am looking forward to more.

why is there no content after the first scene?

The faces of the characters are super delicate, and the costumes are also very popular！Come on!!

Why is there no content just after the firsit gallery?

This is beautiful. I love the art and aesthetic vibe of this game. I'd love to see more.

建模渲染太精美了，期待您下次更新是何时呢

这个游戏难吗，或许我需要去找一份攻略？

Beautiful! How often do you think updates will be from here on?

it  wont let me install it says that mega is an incompatible third party site

Definitely loved the reset version you really did some insane work on this JT, definitely waiting for the next update with this one :D

love the new reset, it fixed the original story which was kind of confusing. I love how we now get a background of the main character. Please keep up the great work, this has to be one of my favorite games so far.

The characters in this game are beautiful, and the story is great, but it is too short. I wonder when the next update will be.

Im sorry but after the prolouge i just get booted to the main menu?

Anyway to make the text bigger in android? Text is too small which makes it very hard to read and to know who is talking

刚刚玩完重制版，作者真的真的炒鸡用心，较原版美术，剧情等方面都大变动，继续加油吧，支持mayfly

您好，这游戏我还没玩过只是看到我，因为它目前只有 0.1 内容我猜不是很多。而且我看了公告日志从去年 12 月 1 号发布到现在 12 月 8 发布 0.2 开始我比较想清楚这一年时间作者是在学习新技术吗？刚开始我还以为放弃掉这个游戏了。第二点就是这一年的时间对于 0.2 版本内容多不多就目前画廊 cg。第三点就是未来有没有 NTR 或者半 NTR 路线或者共享路线，半 NTR 路线指第一步不管先看热闹第二部再选择阻止。