i really like the game and the story so far but i only have some complains and its up to u if u want to do it. if u dont want to do it, its all good. so the first one is there were so many flashing light in dialogue or fight action scene its very distracting and blinding hope in future update dont add those there are no option to turn up brightness in the setting
This is a 10/10 game. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update. I just would like to ask, is this a one girl kinda story or is the also harem route(I hope there is) either way this is a good game
I really liked the game, I really liked the plot, the Persians, the realization of the world around me, I'm really looking forward to the release of the full version. Could you tell me when it will be released approximately?
The full version? ...I'm not sure when it will be released, maybe in three years, maybe five years... or I might even return to real life because the revenue doesn't meet expectations. I can't give you an accurate time, because I don't want to deceive anyone.
Nope, you'll need to download the new version when it's updated in the future. The game is not networked... So you have to download the new version to update the game.
This is very impressive. I like how you have borrowed good elements from Eternum with acknowledgement, but also injected your own flavor and interpretation into story telling.
The characters and background rendering is pleasing and more slanted towards surrealism than Eternum and combined together with good use of lighting, shadow and angles, create a unique ambience that I have not seen elsewhere in other VNs.
I've only started playing a couple of hours and so far the story shows potential. Only thing I would feedback is the background music volume is sometimes inconsistent. I found myself adjusting headphone volume time to time for a normalized experience.
Looking at the comments below, it seems like yourself and/or many of your audience is Chinese which explains why the feel of this game is very East Asian.
Please keep up the good work and hope to this game develops further and becomes another classic.
Well, at first, my idea for the music design in the new version was to adjust the volume of the sound to emphasize specific segments, much like in film and television. However, based on the feedback received after the release, it seems that this design approach is not suitable for visual novel games. Therefore, I will rework some of the sound balance in the next version.
Maybe it will be in May, maybe it will be June. The reality of what needs to be done regarding college graduation is far beyond what I first envisioned.
Gonna start off by letting you know, this is a great game.
There was a weird bug that I noticed though. All sound is tied to the music. Meaning if I lower the sound of the music the voice and background sounds also reduce in volume.
also the H-scene loops aren't smooth, not sure if this is a bug because of my potato laptop or if that's just how it was made.
But other than that great game and can't wait for more to come.
I can record a video of the music bug. If I completely take music off all other sounds go off as well. I know this is not intentional hence why I call it a bug. I just don't know how I can send you that, since I don't see discord or other social media, where I can upload it to so you can see.
Hi JasonTon, I truly amazed of all the detailed renders and characters, I love all the characters that you introduced in MayFly, all the characters got its own personality and way of approach with the MC, hoping to get more Jimin and Nikita scene they are too beautiful tbh, keep up the great work and I looking forward for the part two of MayFly!!!!!!
Was liking it well enough until the scene with the girl in your home, what kind of person does that with someone they grew up with without a second thought? Should have been a choice.
Now some of the things that don't quite make sense will be explained in the post-only episode... It's just that there's so little progress right now that it's hard for me to make everything clear. Of course, another reason is that I need to add some updates after 6 months of production... Plots that players want.
Limited by personal technical prowess, that's all I can do at the moment. But I've researched some lens techniques for kinetic scenes, and may see them in the new version and beyond.
Hi there, enjoyed the release so far once I got into it, but it took a bit to get there. I can see you've already remade the opening once, but imo the pacing still isn't quite there; the scene with the bank robbers before the heist just drags a little too much imo, and given they don't even have names it's fairly obvious they're not important characters. Once we got past that it was really good, but it being right at the start might turn some people away.
I'd suggest going through that part and working out what parts you don't need just to streamline it a little more, and also maybe consider coming up with codenames for each of them so they seem a little less expendable. Perception is important and if you give away that they're irrelevant mooks, it makes it even harder to justify spending so long with them narratively.
Hope this help, outside of the slow open I really enjoyed what you've done so far and am looking forward to more.
I originally just wanted to use some code names to refer to those non main characters. If you think that not good, I will start adding real names to them in the next version.
It doesn't have to be too elaborate, just as I said, I found myself very uninterested in them because they were very obviously not important yet it took such a long time for the main character to enter.
If there is no difficult development problem, I think it can be updated once every three to four months (February needs to be excluded because I need to go back to my hometown for vacation)
If there is no difficult development problem, I think it can be updated once every three to four months (February needs to be excluded because I need to go back to my hometown for vacation)
love the new reset, it fixed the original story which was kind of confusing. I love how we now get a background of the main character. Please keep up the great work, this has to be one of my favorite games so far.
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was the current game in the itch ver. end with irene? scene or was there more? cuz its just end but seeing ur dev log it say prolong ep2?
yes, its end with irene.
Extension is what's coming in the next update version.
i really like the game and the story so far but i only have some complains and its up to u if u want to do it. if u dont want to do it, its all good. so the first one is there were so many flashing light in dialogue or fight action scene its very distracting and blinding hope in future update dont add those there are no option to turn up brightness in the setting
that it and hope u have a good day
On the first point, you can check out:https://jasonton.itch.io/mayfly/devlog/747811/minor-patchupdate-notes-1
I have made considerable improvements to this.
For the second point, I have no other solution.
这个月何时公开发布呢
Well, that's a hard question to answer...
您的意思是?
This is a 10/10 game. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update. I just would like to ask, is this a one girl kinda story or is the also harem route(I hope there is) either way this is a good game
100% harem~
glad you like my game
I see, I'm glad. I hope pregnancy will be included in the future hehd
Okay, thanks for the answer, but as for the second episode? Is the game still in development?
still in development
the second episode will be released maybe this month or next, and the public version will be made available a month after its release.
I really liked the game, I really liked the plot, the Persians, the realization of the world around me, I'm really looking forward to the release of the full version. Could you tell me when it will be released approximately?
The full version?
...I'm not sure when it will be released, maybe in three years, maybe five years... or I might even return to real life because the revenue doesn't meet expectations.
I can't give you an accurate time, because I don't want to deceive anyone.
作者大大，我是从其他渠道下载到这个游戏的，玩了一章后觉得很不错，找了半天连夜注册账号搞了半天想解答心中的疑惑，也了解到目前只有一个章节，是不是我的这个版本（即使是盗版）只要我不卸载，后来的某一天您更新了新的内容，我再等到那一天再打开就可以更新游玩了呢？
Nope, you'll need to download the new version when it's updated in the future. The game is not networked... So you have to download the new version to update the game.
新版本只能在这买吗，旧的可以删了？
Actually this game is free, you don't need to buy it, and if a free version is released I will just post it here.
好的，我看上面的下载链接要花钱呢
你好，这是网站的设定，你需要点击一行小字“No thanks, just take me to the downloads”，作者并没有强制要求付费，当然如果资金条件允许而且喜欢的话多多支持
This is very impressive. I like how you have borrowed good elements from Eternum with acknowledgement, but also injected your own flavor and interpretation into story telling.
The characters and background rendering is pleasing and more slanted towards surrealism than Eternum and combined together with good use of lighting, shadow and angles, create a unique ambience that I have not seen elsewhere in other VNs.
I've only started playing a couple of hours and so far the story shows potential. Only thing I would feedback is the background music volume is sometimes inconsistent. I found myself adjusting headphone volume time to time for a normalized experience.
Looking at the comments below, it seems like yourself and/or many of your audience is Chinese which explains why the feel of this game is very East Asian.
Please keep up the good work and hope to this game develops further and becomes another classic.
Well, at first, my idea for the music design in the new version was to adjust the volume of the sound to emphasize specific segments, much like in film and television. However, based on the feedback received after the release, it seems that this design approach is not suitable for visual novel games. Therefore, I will rework some of the sound balance in the next version.
btw, glad you like my game~
Indeed I'm afraid this approach doesn't work too well for VNs, better to have consistent volume across.
Alternatively, you can go the same route as Eternum and tone down the BGM volumes only halfway through the 18+ scenes.
Cheers!
Will u update this game in future?
Tbh it's the best artsyle in itch io
glad you like it~
Maybe it will be in May, maybe it will be June. The reality of what needs to be done regarding college graduation is far beyond what I first envisioned.
请问一下，作者是那个国家的人，玩了一会游戏，里面的某些中文让我感觉很熟悉
确实，里面角色也偏向于中国式审美
Is there only one chapter?
Yep
The game itself is new...
I downloaded Android from mega ,the game ends after the scene with black haired girl,is this the full version ryt now or m i tripping
black haired?
Really?
什么时候更新
idk
Maybe update the sponsor version in late April or May.
Gonna start off by letting you know, this is a great game.
There was a weird bug that I noticed though. All sound is tied to the music. Meaning if I lower the sound of the music the voice and background sounds also reduce in volume.
also the H-scene loops aren't smooth, not sure if this is a bug because of my potato laptop or if that's just how it was made.
But other than that great game and can't wait for more to come.
Not all, only music and background ambient sounds will use the music channel.
Because this is really what needs to be looped.
I can record a video of the music bug. If I completely take music off all other sounds go off as well. I know this is not intentional hence why I call it a bug. I just don't know how I can send you that, since I don't see discord or other social media, where I can upload it to so you can see.
https://discord.gg/3ByDCmKh53
This is Mayfly's discord group.
You can find the discord UI under the itch or to the right of the game's main menu, click on it and it's my discord group.
Hi JasonTon, I truly amazed of all the detailed renders and characters, I love all the characters that you introduced in MayFly, all the characters got its own personality and way of approach with the MC, hoping to get more Jimin and Nikita scene they are too beautiful tbh, keep up the great work and I looking forward for the part two of MayFly!!!!!!
glad you like it~~~
你好，玩到你的游戏真的很不错，建模真的很棒，这个游戏是有前作吗？希望你可以快点更新，就这一个场景已经满足不了我了
有個廢棄版本，我不怎麽推薦玩。
更新這個..我會量力而行
为什么玩了后感觉0.2的剧情不像是0.1的延续，在某一程度上有点像是0.1的前传但感觉也不完全是。所以说这两个版本的剧情是独立的吗？难道说是在0.1后作者想到或听取了一些建议将剧情重新改写了吗？如果是这样的话，我觉得0.1也有很多可取的部分，遗弃了的话有点可惜。因为这是我第一次玩到这种还在开发中甚至还在（很）早期的游戏，不是很清楚这种version0.几的意思。但我认为这个游戏非常好，作为一个galgame玩家，虽然这个游戏某些部分可能有点“简陋”和“草率”，但我玩下来没有感觉到任何的雷点，而且行文幽默，有很多梗等，角色很好看，hs也很好用，可惜没有配音，不知道以后有机会能加上（哪怕是ai的配音，但是不知道这种方式能不能够用于开发游戏。而且我玩gal习惯了日语配音，如果听国语的话可能有违和感）。期待续作，作者加油。
改寫了，刪掉了我覺得和賽博朋克世界觀衝突的魔幻部分。或許會在之後用虛擬現實的表現方式來展現它們。
配音的話，短時間內應該不會有吧
安卓版本，没音乐吗？
之前有一版让子弹飞，春梦播比奇堡配乐，那个版本我听音乐是正常的。
现在这个版本我玩到门徒买车这点，耳机和外放都感觉没有配乐一样。
不應該的，應該是正常有的
火车上手机振动是明显有的，到结尾放歌都是好的。
但是从开头开始，感觉是没有配乐一样。至少到门徒买车放狗咬人为止都是没什么声音。
也許是你手機聲音偏小了？
不過這個版本開始我對音樂的設計思路更多是往背景音上靠的，因為我覺得過大的音量會有點喧賓奪主。
下個版本將會統一增強+5db的音量再看看反饋~
也有可能，如果这样说的话也合理。
之前那个太阳照常升起足够大声，这回的可能我该整个好耳机试一下
很棒的游戏 期待您的更新
glad you like it~
您好这个游戏我非常喜欢，我希望可以继续玩到，期待您的更新。
glad you like it~
这个作品属于令人享受的那一种，游玩过程很快乐。
出于好奇，这个游戏的文本，最开始是什么语言？
这个游戏开头是不是在致敬蝙蝠侠黑暗骑士😀
yep
亲爱的作者，这个游戏目前只有这么多内容吗？只有一个动作屏幕，它就结束了
just it
期待您的更新
Was liking it well enough until the scene with the girl in your home, what kind of person does that with someone they grew up with without a second thought? Should have been a choice.
Now some of the things that don't quite make sense will be explained in the post-only episode... It's just that there's so little progress right now that it's hard for me to make everything clear.
Of course, another reason is that I need to add some updates after 6 months of production... Plots that players want.
you gonna add a walkthrough mod in future? Some people are quite stupid when it comes to games, Me included
maybe
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2014开心！
游戏不错，未来也有很大的进步空间。
说几句建议，细节方面：发型和衣服希望能有更多种类变化(乳头颜色红一点更能吸引眼球)
镜头的运用差一点意思，动态图像的cg截取必须有镜头的水平旋转或前后拉伸的效果运用，再配上轻柔的呻吟声。(与固定镜头角度无声的动态cg相比，是降维打击)
色情动态图像cg中的旋转镜头或拉伸镜头运用，对女角色的身材展示，胸部晃动效果，臀部摆动效果，都比固定角度镜头好太多太多。
希望游戏越来越火，p站很快赞助超一千人，2000人……
更更希望你下次会有女角色的淫秽场景低声呻吟娇喘(非常加分的)和多种爱爱姿势，多种镜头角度运用的淫秽场景。
Limited by personal technical prowess, that's all I can do at the moment. But I've researched some lens techniques for kinetic scenes, and may see them in the new version and beyond.
Hi there, enjoyed the release so far once I got into it, but it took a bit to get there. I can see you've already remade the opening once, but imo the pacing still isn't quite there; the scene with the bank robbers before the heist just drags a little too much imo, and given they don't even have names it's fairly obvious they're not important characters. Once we got past that it was really good, but it being right at the start might turn some people away.
I'd suggest going through that part and working out what parts you don't need just to streamline it a little more, and also maybe consider coming up with codenames for each of them so they seem a little less expendable. Perception is important and if you give away that they're irrelevant mooks, it makes it even harder to justify spending so long with them narratively.
Hope this help, outside of the slow open I really enjoyed what you've done so far and am looking forward to more.
I originally just wanted to use some code names to refer to those non main characters.
If you think that not good, I will start adding real names to them in the next version.
It doesn't have to be too elaborate, just as I said, I found myself very uninterested in them because they were very obviously not important yet it took such a long time for the main character to enter.
why is there no content after the first scene?
Because that's all
The faces of the characters are super delicate, and the costumes are also very popular！Come on!!
glad you like it~
Why is there no content just after the firsit gallery?
yeah me too
This is beautiful. I love the art and aesthetic vibe of this game. I'd love to see more.
glad you like it~
建模渲染太精美了，期待您下次更新是何时呢
If there is no difficult development problem, I think it can be updated once every three to four months (February needs to be excluded because I need to go back to my hometown for vacation)
这个游戏难吗，或许我需要去找一份攻略？
不難，基本上都是一些很基礎的選項。
好的，这是个很精美的游戏，祝你成功
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Beautiful! How often do you think updates will be from here on?
If there is no difficult development problem, I think it can be updated once every three to four months (February needs to be excluded because I need to go back to my hometown for vacation)
it wont let me install it says that mega is an incompatible third party site
Try other download methods?
dont work
Definitely loved the reset version you really did some insane work on this JT, definitely waiting for the next update with this one :D
glad you like it~
love the new reset, it fixed the original story which was kind of confusing. I love how we now get a background of the main character. Please keep up the great work, this has to be one of my favorite games so far.
glad you like it~
The characters in this game are beautiful, and the story is great, but it is too short. I wonder when the next update will be.
Next year~
maybe April?maybe.
Im sorry but after the prolouge i just get booted to the main menu?
Perhaps you have completed all the current plot content.
...what?
sorry, i went to the wrong game for this comment, got my tabs confused
Anyway to make the text bigger in android? Text is too small which makes it very hard to read and to know who is talking
Increase font size in the next version
Nice, can I know when the next possible release of the new version? I might just wait for it before playing
Next year~
Got it, thanks~