MAN, DON'T GET TIRED OF YOURSELF AND TAKE A BREAK, IT'S GREAT TO WORK WITH ETERNUM, YOU CAN RESEND THE PREVIOUS VERSION OF THE REMASTER, I THINK HE'S STILL A CLASSIC!
I like the story so far, but I do agree with some others that the transitions are a bit much especially when they can just be the standard transitions. I'd say, only use the fancy ones when something important is happening and leave out them standard PowerPoint transitions, they just dont really fit and feel very 2013 internet esque, making them feel outdated and just kinda cringe at times. But besides that, great job and looking forward to play the following updates!
This game got the potential to rival Eternum man! but just like that one guys comment, the transition is still kind of wonky. Still, trust me that this game will go far if you put good effort to it! I'll be having fun playing your game for sure!
I'm curious to see how long the next update will be, because I've been looking forward to it for a long time, and I haven't seen it again in Patreon except for the 85% progress of the last time, and I can't wait for your game
Game with potential but there is not enough content to judge the story. The volume of the soundtrack is quite low and i think it should be louder. The special transition like the rectangular things, the wave etc... are use badly, the character just had a shift of posture and nothing special happen so why not just use the regular transition? I think there is a bit too much of info dump in the early game and without some kind of codex i doubt the player will be able to remember half of it. Last thing the soundtrack is well use so i don't understand why some detail are add, ex: the drunkard at the bar when he run away we can heard him run away and we can see that he is no longer in his seat so there is no need so write that he ran away it kind of break the flow of the story.
Hello, first I want to say what a good game it has potential.And second is, that the first time I played it it lasted about 10 minutes or so, then I noticed the Gallery section and I saw that there was space for 12 scenes and in my game there were only One appeared so that's my question? There are 12 scenes available.
Regarding mayfly - actually my design language has always emphasized the insignificance of the individual in the cyberpunk worldview, but it's actually kind of nice to be a little more idealistic.
Damn I need more plz anyways this game is literally good and interesting to play the story is just so good bro ty Jason For creating this game im looking forward for the next upd ❤️ at first when I literally played this I already know that It would be good but still I didn't expect that this would be really good than good loved all the characters bro ty again for creating this game and really I'm out of words this game is really good 👌
I truly love it very much.i don't know how to express my complex emotion when I suddenly find the game,especially this game has Chinese (simplified)!but the game's content is not enough.hope that author can publish as soon as possible.精美的立绘，很多梗，还有地道的中文，剧情也挺好的。希望这个游戏能火起来，这样作者就可以更快更新了！
i really like the game and the story so far but i only have some complains and its up to u if u want to do it. if u dont want to do it, its all good. so the first one is there were so many flashing light in dialogue or fight action scene its very distracting and blinding hope in future update dont add those there are no option to turn up brightness in the setting
This is a 10/10 game. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update. I just would like to ask, is this a one girl kinda story or is the also harem route(I hope there is) either way this is a good game
I really liked the game, I really liked the plot, the Persians, the realization of the world around me, I'm really looking forward to the release of the full version. Could you tell me when it will be released approximately?
The full version? ...I'm not sure when it will be released, maybe in three years, maybe five years... or I might even return to real life because the revenue doesn't meet expectations. I can't give you an accurate time, because I don't want to deceive anyone.
Nope, you'll need to download the new version when it's updated in the future. The game is not networked... So you have to download the new version to update the game.
This is very impressive. I like how you have borrowed good elements from Eternum with acknowledgement, but also injected your own flavor and interpretation into story telling.
The characters and background rendering is pleasing and more slanted towards surrealism than Eternum and combined together with good use of lighting, shadow and angles, create a unique ambience that I have not seen elsewhere in other VNs.
I've only started playing a couple of hours and so far the story shows potential. Only thing I would feedback is the background music volume is sometimes inconsistent. I found myself adjusting headphone volume time to time for a normalized experience.
Looking at the comments below, it seems like yourself and/or many of your audience is Chinese which explains why the feel of this game is very East Asian.
Please keep up the good work and hope to this game develops further and becomes another classic.
Well, at first, my idea for the music design in the new version was to adjust the volume of the sound to emphasize specific segments, much like in film and television. However, based on the feedback received after the release, it seems that this design approach is not suitable for visual novel games. Therefore, I will rework some of the sound balance in the next version.
Maybe it will be in May, maybe it will be June. The reality of what needs to be done regarding college graduation is far beyond what I first envisioned.
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Hello
He..llo?
游戏很好玩，不要累到自己。生活是生活，工作是工作
I wanna play this game but art quality is so good that it feels like it would crash my phone 😮💨
They are not real-time rendering, you don't have to worry about these
I hope it's optimized enough for Android then, I'm itching to download it now 😅
以前玩过旧版蜉蝣，现在等新版蜉蝣真是煎熬，加油
希望有中文翻译
It's always been there, didnt u see that?
Setting - Language - choose chinese what u want
MAN, DON'T GET TIRED OF YOURSELF AND TAKE A BREAK, IT'S GREAT TO WORK WITH ETERNUM, YOU CAN RESEND THE PREVIOUS VERSION OF THE REMASTER, I THINK HE'S STILL A CLASSIC!
I didn't work with ETERNUM
Question Can it be online before the remastered version, I think he is still a classic
No, I've deleted it and I think it was a complete failure of an attempt
No, I think it's our bridge, think about it!! buddy
Are this game is dead 70 day is long enough
Nope, I'm still alive
Development is in its final stages and I'm pretty much working twelve hours a day, so I don't have time to respond too much
加油奥作者，我非常看好这部作品是因为它的美术实在是太吸引人了，以及您能否告知下一次的更新时间呢
插眼
It's a great game, but the 0.1 content in the remastered version is too little. How can I get the 0.2 point old version? I can't wait, it's really fun
I like the story so far, but I do agree with some others that the transitions are a bit much especially when they can just be the standard transitions. I'd say, only use the fancy ones when something important is happening and leave out them standard PowerPoint transitions, they just dont really fit and feel very 2013 internet esque, making them feel outdated and just kinda cringe at times. But besides that, great job and looking forward to play the following updates!
作者能不能把第一版就22年发的那个。也给放出来？我这个第一版还没玩儿完就直接玩儿的第二版，第二版就一个故事。玩儿完了，现在不知道去哪儿下载了。
个人觉得如果加上游戏角色的对话配音一定会大爆。(推荐一下日本配音很便宜)不过要是转成什么俄语版英语版可能比较麻烦。
MayFly- 安卓 v0.1外部
12月 27， 2022
能不能放上来一下呀？重制版太短了，不过瘾，想试一下22年的这一版，可以吗？
This game got the potential to rival Eternum man! but just like that one guys comment, the transition is still kind of wonky. Still, trust me that this game will go far if you put good effort to it! I'll be having fun playing your game for sure!
尝试了下看上去是最新的版本（23.12.7发布的），安装显示版本是0.1.4，好像只有第一章。传说中的第二章在哪，我是下错安装包了吗？
just once.
reset 0.2 still in work
为什么我的没有声音
I'm curious to see how long the next update will be, because I've been looking forward to it for a long time, and I haven't seen it again in Patreon except for the 85% progress of the last time, and I can't wait for your game
Game with potential but there is not enough content to judge the story. The volume of the soundtrack is quite low and i think it should be louder. The special transition like the rectangular things, the wave etc... are use badly, the character just had a shift of posture and nothing special happen so why not just use the regular transition? I think there is a bit too much of info dump in the early game and without some kind of codex i doubt the player will be able to remember half of it. Last thing the soundtrack is well use so i don't understand why some detail are add, ex: the drunkard at the bar when he run away we can heard him run away and we can see that he is no longer in his seat so there is no need so write that he ran away it kind of break the flow of the story.
Hope to see more of your game, good luck !
For most of your feedback: https://jasonton.itch.io/mayfly/devlog/747811/minor-patchupdate-notes-1
I am ready to give corrections in the new update.
Regarding the story side of things - maybe I'll build in a collection of game settings if I have time... Sure, if I have time.
Glad u like my game!
Hello, first I want to say what a good game it has potential.And second is, that the first time I played it it lasted about 10 minutes or so, then I noticed the Gallery section and I saw that there was space for 12 scenes and in my game there were only One appeared so that's my question? There are 12 scenes available.
Thank you:)
That was actually a mistake, and I don't think I should have put a question mark on a scene that wasn't there.
我有个疑问，为什么我这里只有一部分到那个姐姐那里，它就自动弹成了主页。
never hear that
Can you give me the video about this bug?
意思就是我只遇到了一个色色名场面后面就没有了
Because, it's 0.1.
发送不了视频啊。
我有个疑问就是0.2版本好久了什么时候出0.3呢？是不是把大部分时间用在0.2重制版了，我看评论您好像在读大学然后生病等原因延缓进度，我希望您能多注意身体健康然后我很喜欢这款游戏和永恒世界，期待0.3的到来🥳
顶
里面的每个角色都个性分明，非常喜欢这款游戏，也希望这样子好的作品能一直走下去，期待未来的完全版《蜉蝣》。蜉蝣虽弱小，但千千万万个蜉蝣托起整个族群；蜉蝣虽命微，但千千万万个蜉蝣不断进行生命轮回。
Thanks for the recognition and love~
Regarding mayfly - actually my design language has always emphasized the insignificance of the individual in the cyberpunk worldview, but it's actually kind of nice to be a little more idealistic.
MAYBE? I guess.
支持作者🥰
I'd rate it high if there were girls with small breasts.
现在才出一点点呢，没准后面有平胸角色
Damn I need more plz anyways this game is literally good and interesting to play the story is just so good bro ty Jason For creating this game im looking forward for the next upd ❤️ at first when I literally played this I already know that It would be good but still I didn't expect that this would be really good than good loved all the characters bro ty again for creating this game and really I'm out of words this game is really good 👌
Glad u like it bro
Hiiiii can I get walkthrough for this game
Will be added in the next version...
其实还好，对话类型的游戏，关键节点存档，就可以看到所有内容
I truly love it very much.i don't know how to express my complex emotion when I suddenly find the game,especially this game has Chinese (simplified)!but the game's content is not enough.hope that author can publish as soon as possible.精美的立绘，很多梗，还有地道的中文，剧情也挺好的。希望这个游戏能火起来，这样作者就可以更快更新了！
Glad u like it bro
Great game with a (somehow) even better atmosphere. (Shoutout the tweaker on the subway)
Glad u like it~
Amazing Game, When is the new update be released?
Glad u like it
I've just recovered from some minor illness and am returning to the game for updates
Good game bro
Glad u like it
When do you plan to add walkthrough to this game. It will really help us to know where did we go wrong in the choices. Tia
I had a plan for this... But I did not add an official walkthrough considering there are not many options for 0.1.
If everything is ideal, I will add it in the next version.
was the current game in the itch ver. end with irene? scene or was there more? cuz its just end but seeing ur dev log it say prolong ep2?
yes, its end with irene.
Extension is what's coming in the next update version.
i really like the game and the story so far but i only have some complains and its up to u if u want to do it. if u dont want to do it, its all good. so the first one is there were so many flashing light in dialogue or fight action scene its very distracting and blinding hope in future update dont add those there are no option to turn up brightness in the setting
that it and hope u have a good day
On the first point, you can check out:https://jasonton.itch.io/mayfly/devlog/747811/minor-patchupdate-notes-1
I have made considerable improvements to this.
For the second point, I have no other solution.
这个月何时公开发布呢
Well, that's a hard question to answer...
您的意思是?
This is a 10/10 game. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update. I just would like to ask, is this a one girl kinda story or is the also harem route(I hope there is) either way this is a good game
100% harem~
glad you like my game
I see, I'm glad. I hope pregnancy will be included in the future hehd
Okay, thanks for the answer, but as for the second episode? Is the game still in development?
still in development
the second episode will be released maybe this month or next, and the public version will be made available a month after its release.
I really liked the game, I really liked the plot, the Persians, the realization of the world around me, I'm really looking forward to the release of the full version. Could you tell me when it will be released approximately?
The full version?
...I'm not sure when it will be released, maybe in three years, maybe five years... or I might even return to real life because the revenue doesn't meet expectations.
I can't give you an accurate time, because I don't want to deceive anyone.
作者大大，我是从其他渠道下载到这个游戏的，玩了一章后觉得很不错，找了半天连夜注册账号搞了半天想解答心中的疑惑，也了解到目前只有一个章节，是不是我的这个版本（即使是盗版）只要我不卸载，后来的某一天您更新了新的内容，我再等到那一天再打开就可以更新游玩了呢？
Nope, you'll need to download the new version when it's updated in the future. The game is not networked... So you have to download the new version to update the game.
新版本只能在这买吗，旧的可以删了？
Actually this game is free, you don't need to buy it, and if a free version is released I will just post it here.
好的，我看上面的下载链接要花钱呢
你好，这是网站的设定，你需要点击一行小字“No thanks, just take me to the downloads”，作者并没有强制要求付费，当然如果资金条件允许而且喜欢的话多多支持
This is very impressive. I like how you have borrowed good elements from Eternum with acknowledgement, but also injected your own flavor and interpretation into story telling.
The characters and background rendering is pleasing and more slanted towards surrealism than Eternum and combined together with good use of lighting, shadow and angles, create a unique ambience that I have not seen elsewhere in other VNs.
I've only started playing a couple of hours and so far the story shows potential. Only thing I would feedback is the background music volume is sometimes inconsistent. I found myself adjusting headphone volume time to time for a normalized experience.
Looking at the comments below, it seems like yourself and/or many of your audience is Chinese which explains why the feel of this game is very East Asian.
Please keep up the good work and hope to this game develops further and becomes another classic.
Well, at first, my idea for the music design in the new version was to adjust the volume of the sound to emphasize specific segments, much like in film and television. However, based on the feedback received after the release, it seems that this design approach is not suitable for visual novel games. Therefore, I will rework some of the sound balance in the next version.
btw, glad you like my game~
Indeed I'm afraid this approach doesn't work too well for VNs, better to have consistent volume across.
Alternatively, you can go the same route as Eternum and tone down the BGM volumes only halfway through the 18+ scenes.
Cheers!
Will u update this game in future?
Tbh it's the best artsyle in itch io
glad you like it~
Maybe it will be in May, maybe it will be June. The reality of what needs to be done regarding college graduation is far beyond what I first envisioned.
请问一下，作者是那个国家的人，玩了一会游戏，里面的某些中文让我感觉很熟悉
确实，里面角色也偏向于中国式审美
Is there only one chapter?
Yep
The game itself is new...